Wow! We LOVE your shark poem! Did you do your work in Pixie or on a Smartnotebook file? – Mrs. Duray’s 1st Grade Class in Colorado, USA
Tom Jacobs
January 5, 2011 at 3:37 PM
Shay,
What a wonderful poem! The words you used like “bite bite bite” and “flip flap” helped me to really feel and see your shark in action!
Keep writing!
adunsiger
January 5, 2011 at 3:39 PM
I love your poem too! You used so many great adjectives. I really get a picture of the shark in my head. I hope that you’ll write another animal poem.
Keep on blogging!
Love,
Miss Dunsiger
Vicky Saumell
January 5, 2011 at 3:45 PM
Hi, Shay!
What a wonderful poem!
I could picture the shark swimming menacingly!
Best,
Miss Vicky from Argentina
Cyndie Jacobs
January 5, 2011 at 3:51 PM
I love your poem too! It paints a picture for me of what a real shark is like in the water. I know that if I were a shark, I wouldn’t be too happy because I don’t like the taste of fish!! :)
Miss Amendola
January 5, 2011 at 3:54 PM
What a beautiful poem! Great rhyming with “sight” and “bite”. I could picture the shark swimming and biting as I read it. Guess what: I got to swim with sharks once!
-Miss Amendola
Stoney Creek, Ontario
Mrs. Jacobs
January 5, 2011 at 4:05 PM
Shay,
Wow! I felt as if the shark was in the water with me! I will have to be careful the next time I go swimming in the ocean. I hope the next time you write another poem you’ll share it with all of us.
gsandler
January 5, 2011 at 4:40 PM
What a beautiful poem! You’re such a wonderful writer! I could really imagine the shark! Awesome job!
Greta Sandler
Buenos Aires, Argentina
Laurie Levitt
January 5, 2011 at 6:05 PM
A delightful poem! You word choice is wonderful. My favorite line is: Nobody would see me I would glide right pass.
Keep writing and keep sharing with us.
Laurie Levitt
Severna Park, MD
shay
March 24, 2011 at 7:54 AM
Dear Mrs. Jacobs
The shark is not reel,but if it was he would be nice.
What a wonderful poem! The words you used like “bite bite bite” and “flip flap” helped me to really feel and see your shark in action!
Keep writing!
Keep on blogging!
Love,
Miss Dunsiger
What a wonderful poem!
I could picture the shark swimming menacingly!
Best,
Miss Vicky from Argentina
-Miss Amendola
Stoney Creek, Ontario
Wow! I felt as if the shark was in the water with me! I will have to be careful the next time I go swimming in the ocean. I hope the next time you write another poem you’ll share it with all of us.
Greta Sandler
Buenos Aires, Argentina
Keep writing and keep sharing with us.
Laurie Levitt
Severna Park, MD
The shark is not reel,but if it was he would be nice.