October 12, 2011 @ 11:30 AM 1 Comment      

The characters

1) The narrator

2) Gordan

3) Paulo

4) Gordan’s Uncle Ivan

5) Mrs.Hoagsbrith

6) Mr.Evens

7) Police

Gordan keeps his teeth and does not put them under his pillow. Grandparents are very nice. Gordan plays tricks. There very nice  in front of the candy store. Gordan rides his bike quickly by the curb then crashes into the sidewalk. The little old lady buys him ice cream because he uses one of his old tooth to fall out. Mrs.Hoagsbrirth tell Gordan Paulo and the Narrator to go and get their project going. Gordan’s Uncle Iven has a butcher.  Gordan goes into the trash can and gets some bones  and his old teeth. the next morning Gordan and Paulo bring the teeth and bones to school. On the way to school Gordan and Paulo stop at the candy store and see their favourite candy  put the bag down. When the boys got to school Mrs.Hoagsbrith told everyone to get their materials out. At recess Mrs.Hoagsbrith told Gordan to go he store and get and not to let anyone see him.

Gordan did not come back for 10  minutes , Gordan did not  back for 20 minutes,  did not come back for 30 minutes. So Mrs.Hoagsbrith paged the office and Mr.Evens got in his car and quickly to the candy store. When Mr.Evens got to the candy store the parking lot was typed up. Then Mr.Evens saw  in the back of a police car. The police said to Mr.Evens do you know this kid. Mr.Evens said yes I taught him every thing he knows. The police opened the door to the police car and shoved Mr.Evens in the car and locked it. Then the police unlocked the door and Mr.Evens stepped out and. Then Gordan stepped out to the police said did you come here to get this. Gordan said yes Mrs.Hoagsbrith sent me here to get the bag. All the police jumped in their cars  and went to the school. Mr.Evens said Mrs.Hoagsbrith will need a week long stress week.

I think this was a good story because it had lots of action and the  characters are really funny.

 

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September 29, 2011 @ 3:04 PM 1 Comment      

Do you like pizza because I do ? I also candy some times. But I always like fruit and veggies. My favourite food is pizza. What is your favourite food?

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September 29, 2011 @ 2:37 PM 2 Comments      

On Friday I went to Woss and then went to my Auntie Shelley’s house.  My baby cousin Jaksynne is so cute and I got to hold her. On Saturday I went to the lake and went for a swim in the cold lake . On Sunday, I woke up and played with my new puppy Marphy. He is a lapso -apso. Then I went back to the lake and went for a boat ride and swam some more in the cold lake. Then I went home and had a nice warm shower . Then I went and watched T.V. Then went to bed that was my weekend.

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