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The Sun

June 13, 2010 @ 3:19 PM 4 Comments      

The Sun.

Bright and glowing,

Yellow.

It’s rays beaming on your face on a hot day.

Like a big beach ball,

Moving around from place to place,

Everywhere you go

Always looking at you.

The glowing beach ball.

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  • Olivia, I really liked reading your poem. I really liked how you stuck to the idea of the sun being…
    by Meghan3 on "The Sun"
  • Olivia, I enjoyed reading your poem because I can visually see how you felt behind the words. In my opinion,…
    by Morgan3 on "The Sun"
  • Olivia, I really like your poem. I like the way you described the sun with the similie you put in…
    by Yejean3 on "The Sun"
  • olivia, I really enjoyed your poem and your sentence structure was amazing. I like your connection of the beach ball…
    by Rony3 on "The Sun"
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