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Polar Bear Pie by Ellie

February 22, 2011 @ 12:46 PM 5 Comments      

Ellie wrote a wonderful paragraph about our tasty simile activity.  Check it out below!

We had some Polar Bear Pie today.  I thought I could gobble it in10 bites. It actully turned out to be 36 bites.  It was as cold as ice.  The ice cream was as white as snow.  The chocolate was as brown as my hair.  The stick was as long as 2 of my erasers.  I LOVED the Polar Bear Pie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

                           

 

5 Comments

  1. Olivia
    February 24, 2011 at 9:48 AM
    Dear Ellie why did you put so many exlimshinpots at the end?
  2. Ellie
    February 25, 2011 at 10:12 AM
    I did that, because I really liked it!!!!
  3. PAYTON
    February 25, 2011 at 10:18 AM
    WOW!!!!!36 bites mine was 70!!!
  4. Ellie
    February 28, 2011 at 9:15 AM
    Impressive! How did you end up with 70 bites?
  5. Payton
    April 13, 2011 at 8:53 AM
    Mine took a long time Ellie!!!!!

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