The Aliens are Coming

February 20, 2012 @ 5:15 AM 1 Comment      

Once upon a time there was aliens.  They lived on Mars.  Mars had lots of water so they could survive.  There was this little alien who wanted to go to Earth because his dad was an astronaut.  So he went secretly on the ship with his dad.  He was unnoticed.  When they got on earth they found out he was there.  They punished him.  Then they walked on Earth and saw a human.  The human ran.  The human’s kids had noticed them.  They didn’t run though.  They said hi to the aliens and had a picnic.  Then the aliens left.

1 Comment

  1. Aboubakr AIS
    March 7, 2012 at 6:18 AM
    Hi nice story. Its really creative but I think you should make the story more interesting. I like the idea but the problems the ending. Maybe you should make the little alien kid to sneak away on earth and then he becomes friends with a couple of humans and they have to disguise him as a human because he has to hide from other humans so they don’t capture him and probably kill him.

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