September 28, 2011 @ 6:15 PM
I didn’t know if this was worth telling, but i’d like to see how you guys thought about the story. So here it goes!
This is a love story. This is an action story. This, is a true story (not realy though). This is a story about Dale, a 19 year old slave on the planet Giel (pronounced Gee-el) with his 11 year old sistor, Lena(LEE-NAW).Thier old master Kel, was a kind old man, but is selling them for a new house. Selfish, right? So anyway, when Dale is bought, he is thrown into a rage because he and Lena are seperated. “LENA!” Dale shouts while kneeing a guard in the solar plexis. “DONT’ TAKE MY SISTER!” Dale lunges towards Hiu(HE-YOU), Lena’s buyer. In mid-air, he gets tazed by a guard.When he awakes, he finds himself on a rickety old rowboat, wraped in brass chains. Groggily,(not sure if thats a word)he looks around and sees an old women.Dale struggles to get free.”Save your energy boy, you cant get out.” the women says in a raspy, pained voice.”Where am I?” Dale questions, trying to supress his hatred for his life.”Where’s my sister!?!!?!??!?!”
“Long gone” says the women.”I’m Maldrich, your owner.”
I have no owner!” shouts Dale, trying to roll out of the boat. Maldrich laughs, pulling a leash attached to Dales chains with suprising force.”You can’t escape boy, you’ll never escape! She was right. ” Now when we get to shore, you must build me a shack for my clohes, a hut for food, and a bed for yourself. You’ll be staing for a long time, so get comfortable.” And he did. He had no choice. Over the years,Dale grew into a fine, strong young man. Then on March 21, his birthady, he is brought to a Yerthing, a vainity show where masters and mistress enter their slaves in a contest. The winning master or mistress gets 1000000 weiks, the money used, and the slave is freed, never again to serve angainst his or her will. When Dale arrives, he experiences a bitter sweet moment. There, on the bench across from him, was Lena.
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