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summer!

April 25, 2011 @ 12:04 PM 4 Comments      

summer is so fun

playing in the hot hot sun

and going swimming

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HOME MADE BOAT

April 11, 2011 @ 11:49 AM 6 Comments      

This boat that we just built is just fine

And don’t try to tell us it’s not.

The sides and back are divine

It’s the bottom I guess we forgot.

By Shel Silverstein

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  • I love your pome Jaim.
    by JakobW on "summer!"
  • I like how you put detail in your poem!
    by GabrielleL on "summer!"
  • awesome Jaim love how u highlighted the words!
    by LucasH on "summer!"
  • wow jaim thats awesome i like summer 2 i like the sun and swimming summer is fun
    by LailaA on "summer!"
  • I Love It!!! My Dad Used To Drive A Boat Not Build one!!!! GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!
    by KlairhaL on "HOME MADE BOAT"
  • THAT HERT
    by HaileyA on "HOME MADE BOAT"
  • FUNNY SO MUCH
    by HaileyA on "HOME MADE BOAT"
  • pooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr people!!!!
    by KatherineR on "HOME MADE BOAT"
  • wicked Funny Because he forgot one part of the boat.
    by ChristopherK on "HOME MADE BOAT"
  • nice poem jaim cool awesome i like the part when you said its the bottom i guess we forgot
    by LailaA on "HOME MADE BOAT"
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