I love this! It makes me want to lay on the beach and eat some cold, juicy fruit!
wmchamberlain
February 23, 2010 at 9:50 PM
Great picture, it really helps me visualize your poem. I really love peaches, but I don’t like the fuzzy skin on my tongue. It feels like it sucks all the water out of my mouth!
Mr. C
Mr Wood
February 23, 2010 at 10:37 PM
Your poem reminded me to take some yummy peaches on our school beach picnic trip on Friday. I will tell everyone your couplet.
Mr. C