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Beach (Couplet)

February 23, 2010 @ 8:21 PM 12 Comments      

One day I went to the beach

At the beach I ate a peach.

If you can think of a couplet please post

12 Comments

  1. Mrs. Kolbert
    I love this! It makes me want to lay on the beach and eat some cold, juicy fruit!
  2. wmchamberlain
    Great picture, it really helps me visualize your poem. I really love peaches, but I don’t like the fuzzy skin on my tongue. It feels like it sucks all the water out of my mouth!
    Mr. C
  3. Mr Wood
    Your poem reminded me to take some yummy peaches on our school beach picnic trip on Friday. I will tell everyone your couplet.
  4. Jordana
    Did you scan it???
  5. Jessica
    Great pic!!!!!!!!! Great poem too!
  6. Gabby
    Yes Jordana
  7. Maria C
    Spectacular job,keep up the good work!
  8. Lilly R.
    Wow nice poem and drawing
  9. Jordana
    Thanks and nice drawing!
  10. Gabby
    Thank you for commenting
  11. Madison
    OMG its so cool I love the picture and poem
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