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Hiakus

March 17, 2010 @ 2:31 PM 2 Comments      

In class we wrote hiakus.
Here are the two I wrote.

Rain

Rain falling down-Drip
Drip drop drip on my window
I love when it rains.

Swimming

In a big pool

Refreshing in the pool

During the summer.

2 Comments

  1. Julia S.
    April 4, 2010 at 8:58 AM
    I think haikus really leave the reader in thought, if they’re written right. Gabby, your haiku left me thinking. Keep writing! Poetry is about creativity!
  2. Maria C
    April 4, 2010 at 10:11 AM
    Cool haikus

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