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Paper, paper, everywhere!

February 18, 2010 @ 7:30 PM 6 Comments      

This is my I Am… poem.

I am paper

You know me for my power to be written on

I often live in folders

My best friend is Pencil

Because he puts my power to a use

I fear Water

Because he spoils me to the core

I love Tree

Because she is my creator

I wish the whole world recycles…

I hope you enjoyed my poem. PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!!!

6 Comments

  1. Mrs. Kolbert
    February 18, 2010 at 9:40 PM
    Nice job, Rishi. I really like the part about how the tree is “my creator.” Keep up the good work.
  2. Grace
    February 19, 2010 at 3:04 PM
    me to I really wish the world could recycle way more.
  3. Maria C
    February 19, 2010 at 4:13 PM
    Awesome job, Rishi.Keep up the good work.
  4. MrsW
    February 20, 2010 at 3:16 PM
    This is an amazing poem. I love the imagery you used. I’ve thought of an idea for a second stanza – you could write about the power of pencil and paper together to work for good and to work for evil.
  5. Dwight Jerkins
    February 22, 2010 at 8:58 PM
    I thought you did a great job! I think you have a great understanding of paper and how it’s made and how to use it. I had to read this post as an assignment in Dr. Strange’s EDM310 class at the University of South Alabama. You can find my comments about your post on my blog at http://jerkinsdwightedm310.blogspot.com/2010/02/comments-4-kids-week-7.html
  6. Rishi
    March 13, 2010 at 9:37 AM
    Good idea, Mrs.W!

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